Family feedback from the daily installments of my Camp NaNoWriMo story...
Okay, the part about the pancakes is great! And the character development about a certain somebody crawling out from under a book table is great too...
Oh, and pelting a brother with snow balls is pretty awesome. You also need to write that story "Dirty Dealings in Dugout", what a creative sounding town! What does Mr. McCabe need to see???! I can't stand the suspense. : ) I think that cliff-hangers run in our family.
Nasty cliffhanger, thank you very much! Whole family sitting around eating lunch, getting a read-aloud, and boom...dropped off a plot cliff!
Oh, you did it again. Now the story is exciting enough even for Aimee. Don't go anywhere tomorrow...stay home and write. K? Very intriguing!