The man at the desk looked at him strangely, then at the
boys.
”Those boys must be super hungry.” He mused. One boy, the
youngest said, "No we are just going to bring it to some…” he never
finished. The oldest boy put his hand over his mouth and said something in his
ear. Two men in dark sun glasses watched them at a nearby table. One spilled a
glass of water which caught the Dad's eye. He became really nervous and sent
the kids to the car, and, once he got the order followed, them. The men stayed
and talked. ”We're close on their track. This family will lead us to THEM. Soon we'll find out their plan.”
Copyright 2011 Anna W.
That is such a suspensful story!! I am on my toes trying to think what will happen next. Please finish the story!!! :)
ReplyDeleteWow! Wonder what's going on... You've got it, Sydney, it's full of suspense!
ReplyDeleteNice way to establish tension!
ReplyDeleteI will never go to another KFC!Who are they hiding and bring food to??
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